Charming Chinese Red
December 24th, 2009
Fill in the Correct Connectives?Thanks?
The Lunar New Year
The Lunar New year is the most important festival in the Chinese culture. There are several seasons. (1 Firstly ),it is the first day of the year (2 so )everyone expects a fresh start. (3Secondly) , it provides a chance for family members to gather together and enjoy the union.
(4 Thirdly) many shops are closed during the New year holiday,it does not mean that people are resting. They are, in fact, very busy.(5 Fourthly)the elderly have to prepare the red activities. (6 Also), they may play mahjong and cards games.
(7 )’Good Luck’ is a very important symbol, the food also carriesthe same message.(8 ) , there are ‘oysters’ which imply ‘prosperity’,'fish’ which implies ‘surplus’(9 ) ‘rice cake’ which implies ‘improvement’.
Seeing all these fascinating cusoms, (10 Finally )you want toexperience the charming Chinese culture, come in the Lunar New Year.
Mate, this passage is really not a very good piece of writing. Where did you get it?
I wouldn’t use firstly, secondly, thirdly, fourthly etc…it isn’t very imaginative writing. And in this piece, they are wrong too. No. 4 has to have a contrast connective. The sentence which (No.7) is in doesn’t really make sense. The last sentence doesn’t make much sense either.
However, if I were you, I would do it like this.
The Lunar New year is the most important festival in the Chinese culture. There are several seasons. (1 Firstly ),it is the first day of the year (2 so )everyone expects a fresh start. (3Secondly) , it provides a chance for family members to gather together and enjoy the union.
(4 Even though) many shops are closed during the New year holiday,it does not mean that people are resting. They are, in fact, very busy.(5 Even) the elderly have to prepare the red activities. (6 Also), they may play mahjong and cards games.
(7 Although)’Good Luck’ is a very important symbol, the food also carries the same message.(8 For example) , there are ‘oysters’ which imply ‘prosperity’,'fish’ which implies ‘surplus’(9 and ) ‘rice cake’ which implies ‘improvement’.
Seeing all these fascinating customs, (10 Finally )you want to experience the charming Chinese culture, come in the Lunar New Year.
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